I am a Year 6 at Good Shepherd School in Auckland. I am in Room 5 and my Teacher is Mrs Drummond.
Tuesday, 10 April 2018
Lost - a narrative story
Once upon a time there was a penguin called Jerry and a whale called Bob they were Best friends.One day they were swimming in the antarctic ocean when they noticed the water seemed to be getting warmer and that the area they were in was not familiar. They started to panic “we’re lost!” cried Jerry. In the panic they started to swim around crazily.
If that wasn’t bad enough they both crashed into some coral. Just as they came to their senses a big giant huge massive shark called Tiny came swimming along and gave chase, Bob and Jerry swam as fast as they could. After what seemed like forever Tiny gave up because the water was getting colder and colder until it was freezing. Bob and Jerry realized that they were back in the antarctic! “What was that thing” said “Bob don’t know” said Jerry “but it sure was scary”.
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